Evelyn Chartres Author
Revisions – Page 18

Introducing Chariots of Thunder

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A couple of months ago, I came across an image featuring two chariots fitted with motorcycles.  This peaked my interests since the caption informed me that this type of activity was popular during the Twenties and Thirties.

Since this coincides with The Grand Project‘s timeline; I came up with a story that would integrate this unique historical anomaly.

This story revolves around a motorcycle stunt driver who was taken after a crash involving the Wall of Death. Explore just what patrons of The Grand will do to keep themselves occupied!

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Revising Journey Through the River of Belief

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I have completed my second review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor, enabling him to discover the truth.

There were 189 modifications made to this 9 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

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Revising Ethereal Nights

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I have completed my second review of Ethereal Nights. In this chapter a flapper wakes up in the Grand with no memory on how she got there.

There were 224 modifications made to this 8 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

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Revising the Van Helsing Paradox

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I have completed my second review of The Van Helsing Paradox. This chapter explores what happens when a hunter walks through the doors of the Grand in pursuit of prey.

There were 760 modifications made to this 24 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

This chapter also focused on making the dialogue involving Hecate and Clara easier to read.  This meant finding consistent and memorable monikers to use throughout.

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Revising Toxoplasma Gondii

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I have completed my second review of Toxoplasma Gondii. This chapter follows the tale Morris Little, a travelling salesman who finds he is stuck on a woman with feline grace.

I am considering potentially renaming the chapter to Siamese Dreams.   I feel the title may be a bit too cryptic.  Any thoughts?

There were 367 modifications made to this 11 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.