Evelyn Chartres Author
Revisions – Page 19

Revising Into the Fire

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Into the Fire available on:
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I have completed my second review of Into the Fire. In this chapter, a chambermaid’s car breaks down on her way back home. What could possibly go wrong when the sun sets?

There were 216 modifications made to this 7 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt

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The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt available on:
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I have completed my second review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt. In this chapter, a group of mobsters decides to lean on the Grand and discover what happens when guests have a chance to play.  John is also involved in a break-and-enter.

There were 486 modifications made to this 17 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising One Flight Over

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One Flight Over available on:
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I have completed my second review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel.  John also meets up with Eleanor and leaves him baffled yet again.

There were 370 modifications made to this 11 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising the Mad Hatter’s Mirror

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The Mad Hatter’s Mirror available on:
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I have completed my second review of The Mad Hatter’s Mirror. A story which focuses on a young man involved a traumatic event then explores the effects it had on his psyche.

There were 336 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising the Cheshire Cat’s Grin

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The Cheshire Cat’s Grin available on:
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I have completed my second review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which the focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.

There were 188 modifications made to this 5 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.