I have completed my second review of The Van Helsing Paradox. This chapter explores what happens when a hunter walks through the doors of the Grand in pursuit of prey.
There were 760 modifications made to this 24 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.
This chapter also focused on making the dialogue involving Hecate and Clara easier to read. This meant finding consistent and memorable monikers to use throughout.