I have completed my sixth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 29 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 28% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

I have completed my fifth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 40 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 41% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

I have completed my fourth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 68 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 50% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

I have completed my third review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are evnetual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 135 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 42% reduction in changes when compared with revision two. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

I have completed my second review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal being who discovers there are ramifications to  actions committed throughout the ages. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 325 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency. I also included a new paragraph, which closes the loop as to how John would have missed the hotel given its prominent location.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.