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Yet Another Revision of Penny Dreadful

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I have completed my fourth review of Penny Dreadful. This chapter introduces John Cabot to the valley, town and some of the local lore. The story focuses on The Diary of Frederick Samuels and takes place 30 years prior to the The Grand.

There were 46 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to an eye-popping 68% reduction in changes when compared to revision three.

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Yet Another Revision of the Man and the Sea

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I have completed my fourth review of The Man and the Sea. This chapter introduces John Cabot, one of The Grand’s lead characters and deals with his love for the sea.

There 17 modifications made to this 2 page chapter leading to a 43% reduction in changes when compared to revision three.

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Yet Another Revision of One Small Step

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I have completed my fourth review of One Small Step. This chapter sets the mood for the Grand. The story revolves around the staff doing damage control after a maid ends up in the forbidden wing of the hotel.

There 52 modifications made to this 6 page chapter leading to an impressive 56% reduction in changes when compared to revision three.

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