Evelyn Chartres Author
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My Fifth Review of the Van Helsing Paradox

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I completed my fifth review of The Van Helsing Paradox. This chapter explores what happens when a hunter walks through the doors of the Grand in pursuit of prey.

There were 96 modifications made to this 25 page chapter leading to a 45% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of Siamese Dreams

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I completed my fifth review of Siamese Dreams. This chapter follows the tale Morris Little, a travelling salesman who finds he is stuck on a woman with feline grace.

There were 56 modifications made to this 12 page chapter leading to a 45% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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Yet Another Revision of the Chariots of Thunder

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I completed my fourth review of Chariots of Thunder. This story revolves around a motorcycle stunt driver who was taken after a crash involving the Wall of Death. Explore just what patrons of the Grand will do to keep themselves occupied!

There were 52 modifications made to this 14 page chapter leading to a 40% reduction changes when compared with revision three.

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My Fifth Review of Into the Fire

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I completed my fifth review of Into the Fire. In this chapter, a chambermaid’s car breaks down on her way back home. What could possibly go wrong once the sun sets?

There were 32 modifications made to this 7 page chapter leading to an 18% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt

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I have completed my fifth review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt. In this chapter, a group of mobsters decides to lean on the Grand and discover what happens when guests have a chance to play.

There were 135 modifications made to this 17 page chapter leading to a 48% increase in changes when compared with revision four.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.