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My Fifth Review of One Flight Over

2 November 2016
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I completed my fifth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.

There were 62 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 34% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of the Mad Hatter’s Mirror

29 October 2016
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I completed my fifth review of The Mad Hatter’s Mirror. A story which focuses on a young man involved a traumatic event then explores the effects on his psyche.

There were 56 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 29% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of the Cheshire Cat’s Grin

26 October 2016
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I completed my fifth review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.

There were 34 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to a 9% increase in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of Old Soul

22 October 2016
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I have completed my fifth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 40 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 41% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.

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My Fifth Review of Hadrian’s Legacy

19 October 2016
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I have completed my fifth review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand’s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned. John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in this hard-hitting revelation.

There were 46 modifications made to this 8 page chapter leading to a 48% increase in changes when compared to revision four.

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My Fifth Review of Penny Dreadful

15 October 2016
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I have completed my fifth review of Penny Dreadful. This chapter introduces John Cabot to the valley, town and some of the local lore. The story focuses on The Diary of Frederick Samuels and takes place 30 years prior to the The Grand.

There were 62 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 35% increase in changes when compared to revision four.

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My Fifth Review of the Man and the Sea

12 October 2016
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I have completed my fifth review of the Man and the Sea. This chapter introduces John Cabot, one of The Grand’s lead characters and deals with his love for the sea.

There were 12 modifications made to this 2 page chapter leading to a 29% reduction in changes when compared to revision four.

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My Fifth Review of One Small Step

10 October 2016
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I have completed my fifth review of One Small Step. This chapter sets the mood for the Grand. The story revolves around the staff doing damage control after a maid ends up in the forbidden wing of the hotel.

There were 45 modifications made to this 6 page chapter leading to a 13% reduction in changes when compared to revision four.

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