Evelyn Chartres Author
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My Sixth Review of One Flight Over

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I completed my sixth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.

There were 31 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 50% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.

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My Sixth Review of the Mad Hatter’s Mirror

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I completed my sixth review of The Mad Hatter’s Mirror. A story which focuses on a young man involved a traumatic event then explores the effects on his psyche.

There were 32 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 43% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

My Sixth Review of the Cheshire Cat’s Grin

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I completed my sixth review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.

There were 11 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to an impressive 68% decrease in changes when compared with revision five.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.

My Sixth Review of Old Soul

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I have completed my sixth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 29 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 28% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.

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My Sixth Review of Hadrian’s Legacy

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I have completed my sixth review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand’s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned. John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in this hard-hitting revelation.

There were 27 modifications made to this 8 page chapter leading to a 41% decrease in changes when compared to revision five.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.