Evelyn Chartres Author
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My Sixth Review of Penny Dreadful

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I have completed my sixth review of Penny Dreadful. This chapter introduces John Cabot to the valley, town and some of the local lore. The story focuses on The Diary of Frederick Samuels and takes place 30 years prior to the the Grand.

There were 630 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 52% decrease in changes when compared to revision five.

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My Sixth Review of One Small Step

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I have completed my sixth review of One Small Step. This chapter sets the mood for the Grand. This is a story which revolves around the staff doing damage control after a maid ends up in the forbidden wing of the hotel.

There were 16 modifications made to this 6 page chapter leading to an impressive 64% reduction in changes when compared to revision five.

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