Evelyn Chartres Author
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Revising Old Soul

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Old Soul available on:
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I have completed my second review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal being who discovers there are ramifications to  actions committed throughout the ages. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 325 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency. I also included a new paragraph, which closes the loop as to how John would have missed the hotel given its prominent location.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising Hadrian’s Legacy

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Hadrian’s Legacy available on:
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I have completed my second review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand‘s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned.  John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in a hard-hitting revelation.

There were 230 modifications made to this 8 page chapter. Overall this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability.  So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising Penny Dreadful

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Penny Dreadful available on:
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I have completed my second review of Penny Dreadful. This chapter introduces John Cabot to the valley, town and some of the local lore. The story focuses on The Diary of Frederick Samuels and takes place 30 years prior to the bulk of The Grand‘s stories.

There were 323 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. The bulk of the changes were centered on the use of formal language to the The Diary of Frederick Samuels.  Seeing as the author of this diary would be of priviledged upbriging and be influced by Victorian literature  the changes felt right.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising the Man and the Sea

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The Man and the Sea available on:
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I have completed my second review of The Man and the Sea. This chapter introduces John Cabot, one of The Grand‘s lead characters and deals with his love for the sea.

There 62 modifications made to this 2 page chapter.  Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition.  Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.