I completed my fifth review of The Van Helsing Paradox. This chapter explores what happens when a hunter walks through the doors of the Grand in pursuit of prey.
There were 96 modifications made to this 25 page chapter leading to a 45% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I completed my fifth review of Siamese Dreams. This chapter follows the tale Morris Little, a travelling salesman who finds he is stuck on a woman with feline grace.
There were 56 modifications made to this 12 page chapter leading to a 45% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I completed my fourth review of Chariots of Thunder. This story revolves around a motorcycle stunt driver who was taken after a crash involving the Wall of Death. Explore just what patrons of the Grand will do to keep themselves occupied!
There were 52 modifications made to this 14 page chapter leading to a 40% reduction changes when compared with revision three.
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I completed my fifth review of Into the Fire. In this chapter, a chambermaid’s car breaks down on her way back home. What could possibly go wrong once the sun sets?
There were 32 modifications made to this 7 page chapter leading to an 18% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I have completed my fifth review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt. In this chapter, a group of mobsters decides to lean on the Grand and discover what happens when guests have a chance to play.
There were 135 modifications made to this 17 page chapter leading to a 48% increase in changes when compared with revision four.
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I completed my fifth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.
There were 62 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 34% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I completed my fifth review of The Mad Hatter’s Mirror. A story which focuses on a young man involved a traumatic event then explores the effects on his psyche.
There were 56 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 29% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I completed my fifth review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.
There were 34 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to a 9% increase in changes when compared with revision four.
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I have completed my fifth review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are eventual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.
There were 40 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 41% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
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I have completed my fifth review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand’s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned. John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in this hard-hitting revelation.
There were 46 modifications made to this 8 page chapter leading to a 48% increase in changes when compared to revision four.
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