Another Revision of Old Soul

I have completed my third review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal who discovers there are evnetual ramifications to their actions. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 135 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 42% reduction in changes when compared with revision two. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.