Revising Penny Dreadful

I have completed my second review of Penny Dreadful. This chapter introduces John Cabot to the valley, town and some of the local lore. The story focuses on The Diary of Frederick Samuels and takes place 30 years prior to the bulk of The Grand‘s stories.

There were 323 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. The bulk of the changes were centered on the use of formal language to the The Diary of Frederick Samuels.  Seeing as the author of this diary would be of priviledged upbriging and be influced by Victorian literature  the changes felt right.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.