Category: Excerpts

  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 50

    The Comte may not have been blessed with thick hair, chiselled physique or a handsome face, but he had excellent hearing. Marc often wondered if that served the man well in life, as a way of weeding out the disloyal staff.

    “Who goes there?” the Comte said. 

    Marc closed his eyes and held his breath, worsening the beating drums in his ears. With a little of luck the man would dismiss what—

    “If you think you can fool me, Marc, you are sorely mistaken,” his father added.

    For a moment Marc experienced what could only be described as a falling sensation. To keep himself from falling apart, he closed his eyes, took a deep breath and bowed his head. Once the drums subsided, alone with the tension that had built up along his forehead, did he open his eyes and pivoted into the doorway.

    “An assassin you are not,” the Comte said. “A cavalry charge would have been more discrete.”

    An European cavalry charge with swords drawn, hurtling down an open field. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 49

    The sounds of two men coming to attention with their weapons rattling were clear from where Marc hid, as were those of heavy footsteps fading. While that meant the guards were no longer an immediate concern, he now had his father to contend with.

    He snuck up to the door and chanced a quick peek. The Comte faced the hallway leading towards the stables. He had a feeling that commotion they were to due to an exhausted servant that Marc evaded earlier. With any luck, she is too winded to pass on details.

    With an opportunity at hand, Marc bounded across the large double doors and pressed himself against the wall. He remained like that for what felt like an eternity, as his heart pounded into his ears. I hope no one heard that.

    Two guards marching down the hallway of a stone keep. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 48

    “Anything to report?” The Comte asked. 

    “Nothing to report since the doctor went in, my lord,” a guard said. 

    Marc recognized the voice as being Hugo, one of the Comte’s personal guards. There would be no way of getting past them without being reported. Bertrand would have no sway either

    “Make sure it stays that way,” the Comte said.

    In the distance there was some yelling followed by several footsteps echoing through these cavernous halls. Whatever the commotion was, it was enough to concern his father.

    “Go,” the Comte ordered. “I’ll stay here while you sort out that mess.”

    The corpulent count talking to an guard. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 47

    While Marc would never admit it, he was thankful for all that weapons training, and running that he had ensured. It served him well as he ran over the dough terrain of the outer perimeter towards a side entrance of the keep.

    He was also fortunate that the sun was leaving just enough of its august presence to maintain sure footing. His pace was steady and true, his sight augmented by his memory and natural reflexes. Still, by the time Marc reached the side gate, his lungs were burning.

    This area between the outer wall and the keep itself was rarely used. There were reasons for this, and the most important was the prevalent stench of a summer day. At one end there were stables with their large pile of manure, and this was where the chamber pots were tossed out the windows. At least they cart off the stuff when the pile gets too big.

    A female servant tossing out the contents of a chamber pot out the castle-like window. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 46

    “Thou shalt not covet…” Marc said once the stars aligned.

    “Now you got it,” Bertrand said. “A beautiful woman like your mother easily awoke something in him that his barren wife could not.”

    It was a story that wrote itself a shame that Marc was a side character in such a poorly written play. I know that Christine de Pizan could have managed far better.

    A French Bishop should 'Though shalt not covet' from the pulpit while facing his congregation. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 45

    Still, they were talking about his father, and of what they said today was true a few popped up. Marc’s personal failings aside, the most obvious commandments were…

    “Thou shalt not kill and thou shalt not bear false witness,” Marc said. “Those are rather obvious.”

    Stealing was a given with their family. His father was bitter they had lost their independence from France. Being under the thumb of a Bourbon enraged him to no end. For that reason they often misrepresented the taxes collected, to line their pockets and weaken the King. At least I know where I get my temper from

    “Thou shalt not covet…” Marc said once the stars aligned.

    Corpulent count using an abacus while surrounded in wealth. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 44

    “Surely you remember the Ten Commandments,” Bertrand asked.

    Marc had to admit that he seldom thought of them. Given that ‘Honour thy Mother and Father‘ ranked above many of the harsher crimes. Given his feelings towards the Comte and Comtesse he often wondered why he had not yet been smitten by God.

    Still, they were talking about his father, and of what they said today was true a few popped up.

    A man stuck by lightning on a cloudless day. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 43

    A question remained. While the result was clear enough to see, the initial motivations were not. 

    “Why?” Marc had to ask. 

    “A great question,” Bertrand said.

    Bertrand took Marc by the shoulders, and kneeled enough so they were at eye level with one another. Some of the staff had commented that Bertrand had dead eyes, but Marc always saw a shine in them.

    “Surely you remember the Ten Commandments,” Bertrand asked.

    An European painting of Moses showing the stone tablets that have the ten commandments written upon them. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 42

    “Were his wishes followed?” Marc said as a stab in the dark.

    Bertrand smiled at that question, he approached the boy and placed a hand on his shoulder. There was nothing threatening to the act, and had a strangely soothing effect on Marc’s soul. 

    “To the letter,” Bertrand replied with a straight face. “He perished and was buried within these woods. We simply made sure it was on consecrated ground.”

    That would have been a risk, as the Comte might have learned of their liberal application of an order. Still, they were technically correct and his father would never willingly venture out into the forest without cause. That man is so corpulent that he needs attendants to get him up and down stairs

    Corpulent count with servants helping him up stairs. Clothes and style appropriate for the 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 41

    “A snake by any other name,” Marc mused. “Did the Comte have something to do with it?”

    “It can’t be proven,” Bertrand said. “I suspect it’s true. Marcellin was the only man to die in a hunt? Your father the only witness? Who then ordered that he be buried where he fell?”

    That was rather suspicious, but Marc doubted the man would wantonly take a life on consecrated ground. The Church was a powerful force, and the financial penance exacted for such an indulgence would have left the Comte in their debt.

    Picture of a noble man kneeling and kissing the ring of a catholic bishop who is standing. Clothes and style appropriate for the 16th century.

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