Man of War – Excerpt No. 335

He listens to her, focuses on her, pays attention, and is dutiful…”

There was a blank look shared amongst the men. None could connect these were the traits expected of a good lover.

Really? Nothing from the intellectuals?” Beatriz teased. “She camea lot.”

Women can do that?” Aelred asked.

Her initial response, while non-verbal, came across loud and clear. Beatriz stifled a laugh and rolled her eyes.

It’s been known to happen, especially if the man lasts longer than a minute…”

Spanish beauty with tanned skin in a formal gown struggling to hold back a laugh while rolling her eyes. Background is a Venetian grand ball, at night. Clothes and scene appropriate for 16th century Venice.

Disclaimer: This excerpt from Man of War is currently in development. There may be typos, errors, omissions, inconsistencies and so forth.



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