Man of War – Excerpt No. 345

The whore returns

Susanna hesitated, her steps unsteady. She leaned against the wall, and Marc winced as it might soil her gown. This was the woman who travelled through Venice without getting her dress wet; such a misstep was decidedly out of character.

“Is everything—” Marc asked.

“I’m fine… I just got an icy chill.”

“Do you want a sip to warm you up?”Marc saw no concern in offering up a vein. Given their pace, he was uncomfortably warm… I blame the outfit

Susanna hesitated, her steps unsteady. She leaned against the wall for support, and Marc winced as it might soil her gown. This was the woman who travelled through Venice without getting her dress wet; such a misstep was decidedly out of character. Located in a dark passageway lit with torches carved into the igneous rock. Clothes and scene appropriate for 16th century.

Disclaimer: This excerpt from Man of War is currently in development. There may be typos, errors, omissions, inconsistencies and so forth.


Filed Under
, ,
Tagged With

Comments

Leave a Reply

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

Search