Man of War – Excerpt No. 356

There was a woman near the altar dressed entirely in white. Marc noticed there was a harsh beauty to her, and a symmetry that bordered on perfection. He imagined her likeness being immortalised in stone as a goddess or an angel…

“Susanna, pleasure as always,” the woman said.

While the words were polite, they were very much said like the Comtesse would. It was a compliment that made you feel as if you were a failure and would be one forevermore.

“Drusilla,” Susanna said. “The pleasure is all mine.”

A dramatic, high-contrast, cinematic photograph of a stern, aged Countess, with a stern expression, silver hair tied back in a tight bun, and wrinkled, pale skin, scolding a young, timid child with big brown eyes, rosy cheeks, and curly, golden locks, standing in a grand, ornate, dimly lit stone castle, with tapestries and suits of armor in the background, both figures dressed in opulent, intricately detailed, 16th-century French attire, the Countess in a lavish, velvet, dark red gown with excessive lace and jewels, and the child in a simple, yet elegant, cream-colored outfit with a white collar, the atmosphere tense and formal, with warm, golden lighting casting long shadows across the stone floor, with a slight sense of movement and blur, as if the scene was captured in a fleeting moment of intense drama.

Disclaimer: This excerpt from Man of War is currently in development. There may be typos, errors, omissions, inconsistencies and so forth.



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