Another Revision of Hadrian’s Legacy

Hadrian’s Legacy available on:
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I have completed my third review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand’s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned. John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in this hard-hitting revelation.

There were 107 modifications made to this 8 page chapter leading to a 53% reduction in changes when compared to revision two. Overall this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.


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