Another Revision of One Small Step

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I have completed my third review of One Small Step. This chapter sets the mood for The Grand.  The story revolves around the staff doing damage control after a maid ends up in the forbidden wing of the hotel.

There 111 modifications made to this 6 page chapter leading to a 45% reduction in changes when compared to revision two. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.


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