Another Revision of the Chariots of Thunder

I have completed my third review of Chariots of Thunder. This story revolves around a motorcycle stunt driver who was taken after a crash involving the Wall of Death. Explore just what patrons of The Grand will do to keep themselves occupied!

There were 84 modifications made to this 14 page chapter leading to an impressive 57% reduction changes when compared with revision two.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.