Another Revision of the Cheshire Cat’s Grin

I have completed my third review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which the focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.

There were 86 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to a 54% reduction in changes when compared with revision two. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.