Revising Hadrian’s Legacy

I have completed my second review of Hadrian’s Legacy. This story focuses on the construction of the Grand‘s defensive wall, the Georgian involvement and the reasons behind it being commissioned.  John is also introduced to the existence of the Grand in a hard-hitting revelation.

There were 230 modifications made to this 8 page chapter. Overall this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability.  So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.