Revising Into the Fire

I have completed my second review of Into the Fire. In this chapter, a chambermaid’s car breaks down on her way back home. What could possibly go wrong when the sun sets?

There were 216 modifications made to this 7 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.