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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 270

    “What can I get ya?” The bartender asked.

    “Do you have a dry stout?” Clara asked on a whim, given that it fit the decor.

    “I’ll have that,” Clara said after returning in sync with time. “Say, what’s the special for tonight?”

    “Tonight we have braised lamb shanks stew, and pan seared sea scallops and mushrooms,” the bartender replied.

    Those options drove home how much she missed having a kitchen of her own. In the end it was her stomach that voted. The odour of the lamb shanks wafting in from the kitchen sealed the deal.

    “That lamb shank stew sounds devine,” Clara said. “Please and thank you.”

    A part of her wanted to mimic his accent but held back. Getting involved in an in-depth conversation on what part of the island she was hailed from would complicate matters. He wouldn’t believe the answer.

    “Coming right up my darling,” the bartender added with a wink.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 269

    Through all that cacophony, there was something off. When drowning in stimuli, it often paid to focus on what was missing from the equation. There are fewer hearts beating here than people. Despite her best efforts to stick out, no one gave her a second glance. 

    Why would anyone ever notice a plain girl like you?” Silver asked.

    It took her a moment to get a feel for the layout. She checked the website prior to coming here, but wanted to tie it all together in her mind. The most important details for any hunt were the exits and potential areas of risk. Oddthat door doesn’t line up with any known exits

    She spotted an empty stool at the bar and smiled. As she manoeuvred past the tables and patrons, she noticed that several moved out of the way, including those facing away from her. It reminded her of water moving around the hull of a ship as it made headway. Few appear to be aware that they are doing it.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 268

    Clara: I need some information. Did Drusilla have a protégé?

    Clara put down the phone and turned her attention to the other side of her window. From this angle she had a view of the Atlantic. There were white caps forming over the waves and dark clouds loomed in the horizon. A storm is brewing.

    “I’ve been looking for a reason to stay in tonight,” Clara mused.

    She searched the room for a booklet on local restaurants or some flyers. Clara’s search was cut short when the phone vibrated. Clara cocked a brow, surprised that a response came so quickly.

    Evelyn: A woman who’s that powerful rarely travels alone.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 267

    Clara tapped on her messages. She shook her head and tapped the button to start a new conversation. From there, she scrolled through a short list of contacts, and selected Elizabeth, from her choices.

    Clara: It’s me, your live-in angel with black…

    Her thumbs stopped typing. The message sounded way too cavalier for a woman who betrayed the one who she loved. Doubly so when it had been months since she made contact. Instead, she tried a different tactic.

    Clara: I know you’re mad at me. I figured you’d needed some space

    This time she was trying to offload the blame for ghosting her girlfriend onto Elizabeth. That’s exactly the type of shit a drugstore cowboy would write to an ex when his latest catch escapes his clutches.

    Clara was overthinking it. The words did not need to be eloquent, nor poetic. She only needed to write from the heart. Alas, Clara had made a career out of encasing her heart behind an impenetrable wall. Emotions get hunters killed

    Clara: Lizzie, this is Clara. I miss you.

    The cursor taunted her, poisoning her mind with doubt and guilt. Her fingers hovered over the ‘Send’ button, but could not work up the courage to tap. Frustrated, she flicked up and was greeted by the background image.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 266

    She missed the twenties. For her, the world was simpler back then. Sure, her life had always been teetering on the fine edge of a blade, but she was damn good at it. Clara also understood that way of life, and the perks were to die for. Everything she did these days felt like a chore. The gains she made tasted as sweet as a spoonful of sand.

    “I’m sure Hecate has something to do with this,” Clara groaned.

    As Clara gained mastery over Hecate’s powers, her self-control waivered. At night, while in a state between the dreamworld and reality she sometimes heard them conspiring on how to escape her grasp. Their personas are bleeding through to my consciousness.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 265

    Clara was back at the hotel room. In her days as a hunter, she had often been a guest of the best hotels money could buy. Vampires rarely toiled in the trenches, since they viewed themselves as being above humanity. To find her prey, Clara needed to hide in plain sight, offering herself up as a delectable meal… I made sure they got a severe case of indigestion.

    A hunter’s life had its share of perks, including hotels, luxury train compartments, instantaneous travel to major destinations, and the outfits. Clara’s one passion was keeping up with the latest fashions and the Roaring Twenties had been a treat for her. It helped that she had the youth, beauty, and the body type to sell the style… not to mention the attitude.

    These days she wore plain clothes, work boots, and stayed at run-of-the-mill places. There was nothing extravagant in what she did, nor did she indulge. Now she was simply…

    “Practical and boring,” Clara said before letting out all the air out of her lungs.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 264

    “Sister Maria passed willingly through the veil,” Eleanor said.

    “You mean the pale woman with stern features, about yay high and a voice that strikes fear into the heart of children?” Clara confirmed.

    Eleanor nodded before adding, “The one who died violently on the grounds?”

    “How can you even tell them—” Clara asked before realising it was best to avoid this rabbit hole. “While I don’t remember it that way, that’s the one.”

    “She went up the staircase,” Eleanor said.

    “Have you ever known a soul to return?” Clara asked.

    That question was pertinent, even if she personally knew of a few examples. Still, she suspected Eleanor would provide a cryptic response.

    “Moreso of late,” the Eleanor said. “However, I cannot sense their presence if they return.”

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 263

    “This was Ada’s husband?” Clara confirmed.

    “It was,” Eleanor said.

    Clara took the answer as being a clue. She noted the headstone was similar to Ada’s in appearance and similarly aged. Her husband died over a year before Ada passed. What? Pregnancies don’t last that long

    Several questions swirled around her head until one coalesced.

    “Who paid for the tombstones?” Clara asked.

    “Who indeed,” the Eleanor of the South replied.

    “Did you take them to their final destinations?” Clara asked.

    On a hunch she aligned herself so that the east and west versions of Eleanor were on either side of her. This is starting to feel like a game.

    “He came willingly,” Eleanor of the East said.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 262

    “So, are you alone?” Clara asked.

    “What do you mean?” Eleanor asked.

    “I never met anyone else who guides souls,” Clara stated. “Are you the only one?”

    Clara stopped by the second to last grave marker just as three additional copies of Eleanor appeared. She was not sure if their alignment was purposeful, there was one at every cardinal point. This just got interesting.

    “Just I,” Eleanor said in unison.

    “That’s daunting,” Clara said.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 261

    “Are you saying that I can summon you?” Clara asked.

    “Not precisely,” Eleanor said. “I believe nudge is an apt description.”

    “Here I was, hoping that you’d invite me to a girl’s night out,” Clara quipped.

    “No need. There’s always a free table when I enter a room,” Eleanor said before chuckling.

    A humorous reply was not what she expected from an angel of death. While the delivery fell flat, Clara appreciated the effort.

    “As long as I don’t mind stepping over a body or two?” Clara asked.“Or there being no live entertainment,” Eleanor shot back.

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