Evelyn Chartres Author
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Revising the Van Helsing Paradox

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The Van Helsing Paradox available on:
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I have completed my second review of The Van Helsing Paradox. This chapter explores what happens when a hunter walks through the doors of the Grand in pursuit of prey.

There were 760 modifications made to this 24 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

This chapter also focused on making the dialogue involving Hecate and Clara easier to read.  This meant finding consistent and memorable monikers to use throughout.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising Toxoplasma Gondii

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I have completed my second review of Toxoplasma Gondii. This chapter follows the tale Morris Little, a travelling salesman who finds he is stuck on a woman with feline grace.

I am considering potentially renaming the chapter to Siamese Dreams.   I feel the title may be a bit too cryptic.  Any thoughts?

There were 367 modifications made to this 11 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising Into the Fire

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I have completed my second review of Into the Fire. In this chapter, a chambermaid’s car breaks down on her way back home. What could possibly go wrong when the sun sets?

There were 216 modifications made to this 7 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt

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I have completed my second review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt. In this chapter, a group of mobsters decides to lean on the Grand and discover what happens when guests have a chance to play.  John is also involved in a break-and-enter.

There were 486 modifications made to this 17 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.

Revising One Flight Over

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I have completed my second review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel.  John also meets up with Eleanor and leaves him baffled yet again.

There were 370 modifications made to this 11 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.