Yet Another Revision of One Small Step

I have completed my fourth review of One Small Step. This chapter sets the mood for the Grand. The story revolves around the staff doing damage control after a maid ends up in the forbidden wing of the hotel.

There 52 modifications made to this 6 page chapter leading to an impressive 56% reduction in changes when compared to revision three.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.