Yet Another Revision of the Cheshire Cat’s Grin

I have completed my fourth review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.

There were 31 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to an impressive 64% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.