Yet Another Revision of the Man and the Sea

I have completed my fourth review of The Man and the Sea. This chapter introduces John Cabot, one of The Grand’s lead characters and deals with his love for the sea.

There 17 modifications made to this 2 page chapter leading to a 43% reduction in changes when compared to revision three.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.