Tag: Excerpt

  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 56

    “Well played,” the Comte said. “There may be hope for you—if not her then—him.” 

    The name did not have to be uttered for Marc to know who the Count was talking about. In a household ruled by fear, the list of those brave enough to stick their chance doing the right thing was small.

    The smile that returned to the Comte’s face made the son’s blood come to a boil. While his father believed he had the upper hand, the ground truth was the reverse.

    “He will live to regret—” the Count said.

    Teenage boy of French descent red faced, clenched jaw, trembling with rage. Located in a dark castle hall. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 55

    “How dare—” the Comte said.

    “Dare what?” Marc said. “Ask about my mother’s health? Dare to see her before she passes?”

    “Who told you?” the Count pressed.

    His mind had yet to register his slip of the tongue. In his confusion he stepped back, and blinked repeatedly upon realising his failure. Oh non!

    “The Comtesse, my Lord,” Marc lied.

    For a moment it appeared as though the man believed the lie, but Marc had said too much. The commotion from earlier may have died down, but the reasons for Marc being here were obvious.“Well played,” the Comte said. “There may be hope for you—if not her then—him.”

    Teenage boy of French descent who realizes that he said something inappropriate, covers his mouth, wide eyed. Located in a dark castle hall. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 54

    Marc’s eyes narrowed, tired of these games. For the first, his father found a reason to wipe that smirk from his face.

    “Then you confirm—” Marc said in a voice nearly devoid of emotion. 

    “No one is to go inside until the doc—” the Comte replied. 

    “That’s not what I asked,” Marc said.

    Fear had been a constant when dealing with his father. There were repercussions that followed when he displeased the man. That fear never materialised tonight. In the dim light, all he saw was a bitter old man invested entirely in the torment of others.

    The picture of a corpulent old man facing off a teenage boy in dark castle halls. The man appears dark and foreboding as though from a nightmare. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 53

    “Well?” the Count pressed.

    It was clear from the crooked grin on Comte’s sickly face that he knew why Marc was here. He may not know if his son was here to see his governess or his mother, but that detail changed little.

    Marc dug his nails into the palm of his hands. As the pain registered in his mind, he noted that his knuckles were bleeding again, stretching the skin must have reopened the wounds. Still, his emotions were numbed, as though he were underwater.

    “I wanted to see her,” Marc said, opting to be direct. “I heard rumours—”

    “I’ve lost my son?” His father asked. “Listening to rumours like a bunch of old hens clucking.”

    Several women standing in a castle kitchen gabbing. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 52

    “My lord,” Marc said through clenched teeth.

    That response only gave the man a reason to make the man smile, as though those words had hit close to home. What the Comte failed to realise was that Marc knew enough that he could barely stomach being near the man.

    “What are you doing sneaking around?” the Comte asked.

    Marc’s eyes darted towards the narrow hallway that led to Jeanne’s room. Now that the sun had set he noticed how poor the lighting was in this part of the Keep. When the odour of decay and mildew reached his senses, he understood why. This is where they send people to be forgotten.

    The picture of a corpulent old man facing off a teenage boy in dark castle halls. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 51

    The act of mocking him was a ritual . He guessed it was a rite of passage between father and son in their family. Marc’s hands balled up into fists, in an attempt to assert himself. Still, his eyes shifted from point to point, anywhere but at the Comte, unable to face the man.

    This man would have been bald were it not for his cheap powdered wig. Even at fourteen years of age, Marc towered over this troll of a man. The splotchy skin, crooked nose, thin lips, and rotund body were nothing to brag about. Marc often wondered how he looked nothing like his father, or even his wife. Now I know… 

    “My lord,” Marc said through clenched teeth.

    Portrait of a balding man, wears a cheap powdered wig. The man is 50 years old, has splotchy skin, a crooked nose, thin lips, and is short and fat. Clothes and background appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 50

    The Comte may not have been blessed with thick hair, chiselled physique or a handsome face, but he had excellent hearing. Marc often wondered if that served the man well in life, as a way of weeding out the disloyal staff.

    “Who goes there?” the Comte said. 

    Marc closed his eyes and held his breath, worsening the beating drums in his ears. With a little of luck the man would dismiss what—

    “If you think you can fool me, Marc, you are sorely mistaken,” his father added.

    For a moment Marc experienced what could only be described as a falling sensation. To keep himself from falling apart, he closed his eyes, took a deep breath and bowed his head. Once the drums subsided, alone with the tension that had built up along his forehead, did he open his eyes and pivoted into the doorway.

    “An assassin you are not,” the Comte said. “A cavalry charge would have been more discrete.”

    An European cavalry charge with swords drawn, hurtling down an open field. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 49

    The sounds of two men coming to attention with their weapons rattling were clear from where Marc hid, as were those of heavy footsteps fading. While that meant the guards were no longer an immediate concern, he now had his father to contend with.

    He snuck up to the door and chanced a quick peek. The Comte faced the hallway leading towards the stables. He had a feeling that commotion they were to due to an exhausted servant that Marc evaded earlier. With any luck, she is too winded to pass on details.

    With an opportunity at hand, Marc bounded across the large double doors and pressed himself against the wall. He remained like that for what felt like an eternity, as his heart pounded into his ears. I hope no one heard that.

    Two guards marching down the hallway of a stone keep. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 48

    “Anything to report?” The Comte asked. 

    “Nothing to report since the doctor went in, my lord,” a guard said. 

    Marc recognized the voice as being Hugo, one of the Comte’s personal guards. There would be no way of getting past them without being reported. Bertrand would have no sway either

    “Make sure it stays that way,” the Comte said.

    In the distance there was some yelling followed by several footsteps echoing through these cavernous halls. Whatever the commotion was, it was enough to concern his father.

    “Go,” the Comte ordered. “I’ll stay here while you sort out that mess.”

    The corpulent count talking to an guard. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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  • Man of War – Excerpt No. 47

    While Marc would never admit it, he was thankful for all that weapons training, and running that he had ensured. It served him well as he ran over the dough terrain of the outer perimeter towards a side entrance of the keep.

    He was also fortunate that the sun was leaving just enough of its august presence to maintain sure footing. His pace was steady and true, his sight augmented by his memory and natural reflexes. Still, by the time Marc reached the side gate, his lungs were burning.

    This area between the outer wall and the keep itself was rarely used. There were reasons for this, and the most important was the prevalent stench of a summer day. At one end there were stables with their large pile of manure, and this was where the chamber pots were tossed out the windows. At least they cart off the stuff when the pile gets too big.

    A female servant tossing out the contents of a chamber pot out the castle-like window. Clothes and style appropriate for 16th century France.

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