I have completed my second review of Old Soul. This story explores the concept of an immortal being who discovers there are ramifications to  actions committed throughout the ages. In this chapter, John also makes a macabre discovery when introduced to something from Edgar Allen Poe.

There were 325 modifications made to this 10 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. So some of the modifications were related exclusively to formatting and consistency. I also included a new paragraph, which closes the loop as to how John would have missed the hotel given its prominent location.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad display the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.