My Fifth Review of Ethereal Nights

I have completed my fifth review of Ethereal Nights. In this chapter a flapper wakes up in the Grand with no memory on how she got there.

There were 45 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to an impressive 60% decrease in changes when compared with revision four.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.