I have completed my sixth review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor and discovers the truth.
There were 32 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to an impressive 24% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my sixth review of Ethereal Nights. In this chapter a flapper wakes up in the Grand with no memory on how she got there.
There were 21 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to an impressive 53% decrease in changes when compared with revision five.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I completed my sixth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.
There were 31 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 50% reduction in changes when compared with revision five.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I completed my fifth review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor and discovers the truth.
There were 42 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to an impressive 52% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my fifth review of Ethereal Nights. In this chapter a flapper wakes up in the Grand with no memory on how she got there.
There were 45 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to an impressive 60% decrease in changes when compared with revision four.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I completed my fifth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.
There were 62 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 34% reduction in changes when compared with revision four.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my fourth review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor and discovers the truth.
There were 88 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to a 19% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my fourth review of Ethereal Nights. In this chapter a flapper wakes up in the Grand with no memory on how she got there.
There were 112 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to a 1% increase in changes when compared with revision three.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my fourth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.
There were 94 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 50% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, so please feel free to make use of this capability.
I have completed my third review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor and discovers the truth.
There were 109 modifications made to this 9 page chapter leading to a 42% reduction in changes when compared with revision two. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.
Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.
