Revising Journey Through the River of Belief

I have completed my second review of Journey Through the River of Belief. In this chapter John comes face-to-face with Eleanor, enabling him to discover the truth.

There were 189 modifications made to this 9 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.