Revising One Flight Over

One Flight Over available on:
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I have completed my second review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel.  John also meets up with Eleanor and leaves him baffled yet again.

There were 370 modifications made to this 11 page chapter. Overall, this revision concentrated on improving the chapter’s readability. Several modifications were related to formatting and maintaining consistency.

Both Google Docs and Wattpad have the revised edition. Note that the Google Docs version permits comments and revisions, feel free to make use of this capability.


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