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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 240

    The bus passed through a wrought-iron gate supported by a stone and mortar wall. A shiver ran down her spine as the memory of her doing the same as a child resurfaced. Even a tour bus, loaded with weary passengers looking to wet their palettes, was luxurious compared to a horse and cart the farmer used to shuttle supplies back and forth to the school.

    Welcome to our first stop on our wine tasting tour

    Clara looked out of her window as the bus drove onto the paved courtyard. Other than her school being converted into a vineyard, this was her first clue that much had changed since she last haunted these halls.

    Established in 1836 as a school for orphaned girls. To our left

    Picture of an iron gate surrounded by a stone wall, with a cobble stone pathway leading to structures in the background. Image by Peter H from Pixabay.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 239

    Retrace the steps you took in life,” Eleanor told her a few months back. “You may find what you are looking for.”

    That advice had been passed on by an angel of death who went by the name, Eleanor. The one who gave those pearls of wisdom after being urged to ‘confess her sins.’ Like most life-altering questions since they yielded more confusion than they answered.

    Clara had been to six out of the seven continents on this big blue marble hurtling through space. That did not include the time she spent in the Kingdom of Heaven, or within that pocket of reality that contained the Tower. 

    However, the latter two were, for the moment, closed off to her. Clara needed to find her way back to the Tower, serving as the unofficial name for an order of hunters. Clara had been a hunter in life, sworn to rid the world of the creatures of myth and legend who preyed on humanity. I wonder if they’d consider me, as a fallen angel, a threat?

    Picture of the Earth with the moon in the background taken from orbit. Image by Arek Socha from Pixabay.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 238

    Clara grinned upon hearing that her gift had been delivered. She hoped the backpack and its contents would give Julia everything she required to carve out her own path. Clara expected that the werewolf would surrender to the moon’s power tonight, but would hopefully reach back when she was ready. You never know, she might prove to be a valuable ally.

    She clenched her jaw in annoyance. Hecate would not be silenced, forcing Clara to hear the various personas whispering from the depths of her mind. To shake the angel’s resolve, Ethereal interjected.

    In my day, werewolves were considered a disease,” Ethereal said in that distinctive voice that sucked all the joy from the room. “Remind you of anyone else we know?

    Picture of a long-haired blonde with a red backpack slung over her shoulder walking away from the camera. Image by Jose Antonio Alba from Pixabay.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 237

    After he passed by, she double-tapped on the screen to return to the notification, but stopped. All her senses were heightened because there was  someone watching her. 

    She caught a pair of bright blue eyes staring back at her. Clara smiled warmly, at the toddler with curly blond hair, seated next to his mother. The boy giggled with glee at having Clara’s attention, which caused his mother to stir from a deep sleep. Clara pressed her forefinger against her narrow lips and shushed him.

    There was disappointment in those eyes, but it was fleeting. The child looked between his legs to find a tablet and was quickly distracted by a colourful cartoon. Kids appeared to be easily taken in by shiny baubles and simplistic tunes… speaking of which.

    Clara sunk back in her seat, unlocked her phone, and tapped on the most recent notification. Since the phone number was new, the list of potential senders was sparse. Nice and simple.

    Picture of a smiling girl with curly hair hiding a lioness that appears to be roaring. Image by Sarah Richter from Pixabay.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 236

    The man had not noticed her on account of her being plain Jane. This was a relatively recent addition to her arsenal. A power that muted Clara’s beauty and distinctive physical attributes. While invaluable for traversing crowds unnoticed, it also meant being invisible, even if she wanted to get noticed. I’m sure my light jacket, flannel shirt, and jeans aren’t helping matters

    Still, being so casually dismissed had torn a chunk of right out of her ego. His heart rate never even changed…

    As a human, Clara had been a bit of a billboard. With those steel-grey eyes, elfin features, and straight brown hair, people took notice of her. God had been generous, she had the body of a dancer, but with a larger bust. I had the dexterity of a dancer, but my girls could lead to severe neck strain

    During the Roaring Twenties, men were drawn to her, and she loved how they viewed courtship as they would a battle. In the end, Clara always won out. Sometimes the encounter would leave them scarred, but all that mattered to her was the thrill of victory. A shame they come broken out of the box these days

    Picture of a woman walking past a ruined building, no details available to identify them. Picture by Asep Saeful Bahri from Pexels.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 235

    Clara spotted a clean shaven man with a thin moustache walking down the aisle. Those dark brown eyes, sharp features and short hair were a refreshing change from the current trends. He reminded her of a wounded artillery officer she met during the Great War. While their brief interaction had been hurried and hushed, Clara did get her first taste of sexual intimacy that night.

    The memories of barneymugging that thin moustached officer did not help her arousal brought on by the dream. Clara flashed the man a smile, but did not appear to notice her at all. Who the hell does he think he is?

    Her eyes glowed blue for a fraction of a second. Cool your heels! She closed her eyes and forced herself to keep her anger in check. It’s not his fault that he can’t see past the illusion.

    Picture of an officer in the marines as judged by the cap badge and single bar with an executive curl. Dressed for combat in the Great War with a rifle laying against his shoulder and finger on the trigger. Image by Alex Andrews from Pexels.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 234

    It was a wonder that they managed to co-exist as the entity called Hecate. While they could exist as separate entities, this was the exception rather than the norm. That’s why I call them the sisters

    Genuine panic had been a rare occurrence in life, doubly so after ascending to Heaven. Clara figured she was wired differently from the norm, which enabled her to keep her emotions at bay. Such a talent was ideal for hunting things that went bump in the night. It turned out that a clear head was needed when fighting for survival. Who knew?

    Ever since learning how to channel Hecate’s powers, such challenges had become the norm. This curse came with perks, and Clara loved to channel her anger into a coherent beam of energy. Who doesn’t want to embrace their inner wrathful goddess?

    Picture of a goddess standing in the water, the lower part of her dress appears to be made of water. She grabs a lightening bolt from the sky as though harnessing the storm. Image by Enrique Meseguer from Pixabay.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 233

    Something vibrated twice from the depths of her pocket, and roused Clara out of her slumber. While the dream had been pleasant, nothing more than a work of pure fiction. The fact it was designed to tease had soured her mood. In truth, she had betrayed Elizabeth, and not set eyes upon her for several months.

    After letting out a long sigh and slumping into her seat, Clara opened her eyes and rubbed the sleep from them before taking out her phone. With a double-tap the screen came to life, and brought up the notification.

    Picture of a woman sleeping against the bulkhead of a train. Other passengers are visible behind her, although blurry.


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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 232

    Clara was covered in blood, sweat, and caked on dirt after a long night of fighting werewolves. She stumbled into her apartment, and though weary went right for the bathroom. She stopped mid-stride, upon seeing the naked curves of the half-Asian woman standing at the threshold of the door.

    “You took your sweet time,” Elizabeth said.

    “Well, werewolves take a bit more effort to house train than a pug,” Clara answered. “I didn’t want them pawing at the door to be let out…”

    “We wouldn’t want that,” Elizabeth said in a husky voice. “Would we?”

    Clara picked up that Elizabeth’s heart rate was increasing in unison with her own. She smirked, but werewolf blood was decidedly not an aphrodisiac. To mar Elizabeth’s smooth skin with all that blood and grime made her skin crawl.

    “I really should shower,” Clara said. “You want to help me get at those hard to reach—”

    Picture of a woman wearing a hat and sheer out jacket standing in the doorway, her shadow visible ahead of her. Picture by Alexander Zvir from Pexels.

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  • The Van Helsing Impetus – Excerpt No. 231

    Videos purportedly filmed during the last investigation of the Ghoul Hunters, a lesser known group of paranormal investigators, were deemed to be an elaborate hoax.

    For the past several months, videos containing the graphic footage of their rumoured demise have circulated the Internet. While these videos were pulled from mainstream sites because of their graphic content, hacker sites continued to host them, while drawing in millions of unique hits daily.

    While thoroughly discredited by renowned experts in the field, the whereabouts of the group remains a mystery. Local police have stated the investigation is ongoing, and are aggressively pursuing leads.

    Certain fringe groups claim the footage is undeniable proof of the paranormal. Concurrently, conspiracy theorists claim the Ghoul Hunter’s footage proves that the government is involved in an elaborate cover up. Claims which have been repeatedly denied by senior government officials.

    In response to these naysayers, one expert had this to say, —You’d be surprised what you can do with a crabApple Phone these days.—

    Picture of a woman sitting on the stairs, reading a newspaper while it's on fire. Image by Produtora Midtrack from Pexels.

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