I have completed my fourth review of Siamese Dreams. This chapter follows the tale Morris Little, a travelling salesman who finds he is stuck on a woman with feline grace.
There were 101 modifications made to this 12 page chapter leading to a 37% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
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I have completed my third review of Chariots of Thunder. This story revolves around a motorcycle stunt driver who was taken after a crash involving the Wall of Death. Explore just what patrons of The Grand will do to keep themselves occupied!
There were 84 modifications made to this 14 page chapter leading to an impressive 57% reduction changes when compared with revision two.
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I have been travelling of late, which is one of the reasons why my posts are a bit chaotic of late. Today, I managed to get away with a camera and take some shots of the city of Montréal. This is one of Canada‘s oldest cities and will be celebrating its 375th soon!
Specifically I had the opportunity to walk through the Vieux-Port area of the city. There is a lot of beautiful architecture, churches, museums and street performers to find there. For potential inspiration, I felt it would be nice to post some shots from my travels.
I hope you enjoy!
I was out at a cabin when one of my guests brought in some scallops. Since I had some mushrooms, onions and garlic, I combined the ingredients to create this dish. This recipe is quick and easy to make and requires only one pan. Necessity really is the mother of invention!
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I have completed my fourth review of The Virgin Goddess of the Hunt. In this chapter, a group of mobsters decides to lean on the Grand and discover what happens when guests have a chance to play.
There were 91 modifications made to this 17 page chapter leading to a 49% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
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I have completed my fourth review of One Flight Over. A story which revolves around Edward Locke and his complicity with the events surrounding the hotel. John also meets up with Eleanor which leaves him baffled yet again.
There were 94 modifications made to this 11 page chapter leading to a 50% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
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I have completed my fourth review of The Mad Hatter’s Mirror. A story which focuses on a young man involved a traumatic event then explores the effects on his psyche.
There were 79 modifications made to this 10 page chapter leading to a 53% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
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I have completed my fourth review of The Cheshire Cat’s Grin. A story which focuses on a young flapper who falls for the wrong man.
There were 31 modifications made to this 5 page chapter leading to an impressive 64% reduction in changes when compared with revision three.
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This is one of my favourite side dishes that uses an outdoor grill. The #Corn is wrapped in foil to stay warm while guests eat their meals (or return for seconds). This recipe prepares one, simply repeat for each ear of corn.
I was playing around with my camera, intent on creating a featured image for another post. However, when I looked at the finished product it got me thinking. I know! Rather dangerous for an author!
During a flash of creative inspiration, the world I see is both pristine and clear. I could spend weeks writing that scene in all of its exquisite detail. How is that a problem? Like a lightning strike at night, details vanish as soon as they appear.
When looking at the shot, it sets the scene for someone collecting items and ingredients needed to bake a cake. In the picture there are ingredients, a tablet displaying the recipe, candles for later and even some serving plates.
However, once the flash is gone the minds rendition is no longer vibrant. In this case, the richness of reds have bled out from the shot. There is also a lack of detail and the image is cropped in such a way to prevent viewers from getting a sense of the bigger picture.
Like any story there are also inconsistencies or plot holes. How could someone make a cake without eggs, butter or vanilla extract? Why is a candle lit even though the cake is not ready?
Only after extensive reviews, reader input and hard work will author’s rendition approximate the original flash of inspiration. The reds will be more vibrant, the scene will sport a delicious cake that will make readers drool.
To think you can just taste that thick icing and marble cake… Wait? It was Maple Syrup cake originally!
Oh well minor detail. Hope no one will notice!
